Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Journal Entry # 1

         " I am innocent," said Riansford.  "I may have shot General Zaroff but he deserved it. He loves to hunt but not just animals. He lives on Ship Trap Island! He traps ships and hunts the people off them.  He is a murder! This guy was evil! I had a right to kill him. I feel off my ship and had to swim to his island. When I first got there he was so sweet and then finally he told me he was going to hunt me! If I didn't win I would have been dead. After I won I went to his house once he saw me I had kill or I would have been feed to the dogs! Whitney back me up here."
         " He is right here, he is innocent. General Zaroff was a man killer! HE just started hunting humans for fun because hunting animals got boring. He was cruel!" explained Whitney.
          " I did nothing wrong, Zaroff deserved to be killed!" Rainsford said angrily.



1 comment:

  1. Okay - this fits the assignment, but you'll need to use more specific details in your future writings. Don't be lazy or in a hurry when you write.

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