Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Sentences for Cultivated and Disarming

 The little girl was disarming after she got shoved into the deep, cold pool.

The young boy was cultivated after he had to go to school for twenty years of her life.
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  1. KentAugust 28, 2013 at 4:34 PM

    Hailey try to not use "was" in your sentences. "To Be" verbs are weak verbs. Also - how was the girl disarming after she got shoved into the snow? Does this sentence make sense?

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